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Racing thoughts,
my mind's unclear.
Something lurks,
beneath my fear.
So many questions,
twisted lies.
Whispered screaming,
silenced cries.
Haunted dreams,
cause sleepless nights.
Living nightmares,
in shadowed light.
Reaching out,
to love unseen.
Take me away,
hear my screams.
All this confusion,
crashing inside.
Years have been stolen,
tears left uncried.
Now slowly searching,
your lies for the truth.
Give me your reasons,
for stealing my youth.
Trapped in confusion,
fight my way through.
So I can stop paying,
for the things that you do.
©2008-2009 ~giffordm
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written today during school
4/15/08

i dont know...i just dont know
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you don't know?..

wel I know one thing. Great work, I love how you put the emotions to words ;D

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.::doritos is my boyfriend!::.
Tis a fine art work.

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MYSTIC SPIRAL CONSUMES MY ASS IN A CLOUD OF LEAVES FALLING FROM THE MOONS GRACE... do i fit in here yet? Didn't think so... Olive Juice Too!
*hugs you extremely tight and close to me*


I love you and (I know I've said this before) you and I will beat this. WE WILL BEAT HIM and the world and whatever else life decides to fuck us in the ass with. You and I will do it together. I know you know this as well, but it never hurts to be told again...

You and NOT ALONE, baby. Not now, not ever. I promise you that.

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So tell me exactly what freedom means if I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be. Don't wanna be another player losing in this game, I'm trying to impress upon you, we're not the same.
Your work has been greatly improving since when I first started reading it. Emotion on paper helps. Keep at it.

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Was never one with words,
Never been witty,
But I had to write you a song
Because you're so pretty.
Celestial stars have nothing to compare
With the ones in your eyes.
thank you very much

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Like a pheonix we can rise from these ashes and be born again into a new life. The past will die and fall away, but the future is always there.
thank you :)

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Like a pheonix we can rise from these ashes and be born again into a new life. The past will die and fall away, but the future is always there.
:cling:

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Like a pheonix we can rise from these ashes and be born again into a new life. The past will die and fall away, but the future is always there.
thanks :) i will

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Like a pheonix we can rise from these ashes and be born again into a new life. The past will die and fall away, but the future is always there.
this wasnt even just about him...it was about mom some too...mostly mom

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Like a pheonix we can rise from these ashes and be born again into a new life. The past will die and fall away, but the future is always there.

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